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I stood before the window,
Piece by piece I removed my clothing, with the tall cold pane rising against me
And my warmth began gently seeping into the glass—
I closed my eyes, and let my breath slowly out onto that unrelenting surface—

And the spaces started to change—the dim, forsaken rooms at my back voided and arose into fog, and the barest detectable blue shades from the view at my face swallowed me in, just a bit more
Out there, just out of where my barely open eyelids would allow me to see, the gnarled roots beneath the woodland began to give way to clicking, scratching, twisting claws

There was a voiceless screaming rush, the window sill ripped up and the frame jerked away, I could feel their biting untangling hands, encircling my shoulders and my ribs
My neck threw back, I took another inhale and my throat usurped a different sound….
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EvilineMoonflesh Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
very visual to me....beautiful! :love:
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AtticBeneath Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sometimes I gotta venture away from the Pure Love songs, Eviline, forgive me
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EvilineMoonflesh Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Really loved this one!!!....as well as your love songs!!
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AtticBeneath Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
E, oh E I want so much to kiss your wrists!:icondespairplz:
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EvilineMoonflesh Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Why??
wrists?
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AtticBeneath Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
they're so delicate, they're so You,:kiss:
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EvilineMoonflesh Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
:giggle: prins charming ...
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Sublime-Strangeness Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow...beautiful as usual! ^^
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AtticBeneath Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
pretty Cathartic eh??!:highfive:
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BlanketofStarrs Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
This one made my spine tingle.
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AtticBeneath Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
watch the new EVIL DEAD movie when it's out, It'll show you this happening aplenty,
except, my first-person narrator was really viewed as me myself as this was written,
because I don't like harming even imaginary women. the man originally responsible for EVIL DEAD, (now the director of OZ the Great and Powerful) is one of those misogynist gay guys, I believe!:fear::fear::fear::fear:
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